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Stand Up Against Bullying

Post  tishon24 on Sat Dec 20, 2008 1:44 pm

Just a quick video just to stand up for bullying



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Re: Stand Up Against Bullying

Post  LegoShark on Mon Dec 22, 2008 12:12 am

I think "Stand Up Against Bullying" would have been a better title, standing up for bullying makes it sound like you're defending bullying. I think the beginning could have been more fast-paced. It does not take people `5 seconds to read the word "sometimes." Good background animations, did you make those?
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Re: Stand Up Against Bullying

Post  SonicOrbStudios on Mon Dec 22, 2008 2:52 am

LegoShark wrote:I think "Stand Up Against Bullying" would have been a better title, standing up for bullying makes it sound like you're defending bullying. I think the beginning could have been more fast-paced. It does not take people `5 seconds to read the word "sometimes." Good background animations, did you make those?
I agree, the title is a little strange and could have been changed.

Pre-Production is even more important than the production stages. Think of what titles you will use and run them by a friend or family member before putting them into the video. If they catch something early on it will be much easier to fix compared to after the video is done and rendered.

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