Little Fantasy My Short Film by me aka Risk1710 Productions
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Little Fantasy My Short Film by me aka Risk1710 Productions
a short film i made for my assignment for school =) hope you enjoy , youtube made it worse quality also i rushed the ending because it had a set due date lmfao
Re: Little Fantasy My Short Film by me aka Risk1710 Productions
First the things I liked about this film.
Music choices for the Cowboys and Indians scene. The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly theme was assume. As well as the Space landing choice.
I loved the mission to get the cookie jar. Got a laugh out of me with that.
Loved the one dude getting his head blown off.
Loved the cookie guards outfits.
What I did not like
over 2 mins of credits for a short is way to much.
To many black, fade transitions between the different ideas. You did have a hard cut for the agents part and that worked well.
I wanted to see this cookie jar and more importantly the cookies that needed armed guards.
What the hell was a muppet doing in this video?
There is a rule in storytelling, if you show a gun in act 1 it has to go off by act 3. I say that because "I WANTED TO SEE THE COOKIE JAR!!!" Dont tell me about a cookie jar that our actors risk their lifes to get to and never have the pay-off shot of it.
Good work and keep shooting!
David
Music choices for the Cowboys and Indians scene. The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly theme was assume. As well as the Space landing choice.
I loved the mission to get the cookie jar. Got a laugh out of me with that.
Loved the one dude getting his head blown off.
Loved the cookie guards outfits.
What I did not like
over 2 mins of credits for a short is way to much.
To many black, fade transitions between the different ideas. You did have a hard cut for the agents part and that worked well.
I wanted to see this cookie jar and more importantly the cookies that needed armed guards.
What the hell was a muppet doing in this video?
There is a rule in storytelling, if you show a gun in act 1 it has to go off by act 3. I say that because "I WANTED TO SEE THE COOKIE JAR!!!" Dont tell me about a cookie jar that our actors risk their lifes to get to and never have the pay-off shot of it.
Good work and keep shooting!
David
David- Posts : 20
Join date : 2009-01-01
Location : Philadelphia, PA
Re: Little Fantasy My Short Film by me aka Risk1710 Productions
haha great little film. Did you use stock footage fro the planets blowing up?
ranger7theseries- Posts : 7
Join date : 2009-04-17
Re: Little Fantasy My Short Film by me aka Risk1710 Productions
Ive seen this youtube video in the past, not sure when...did you post at the Windows Movie Maker forums?
I really liked those opening credits with the clouds. Any tips on how you did that?
I really liked those opening credits with the clouds. Any tips on how you did that?
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