Little Fantasy My Short Film by me aka Risk1710 Productions

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Little Fantasy My Short Film by me aka Risk1710 Productions

Post  Risk1710 on Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:31 am

a short film i made for my assignment for school =) hope you enjoy , youtube made it worse quality also i rushed the ending because it had a set due date lmfao


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Post  David on Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:19 pm

First the things I liked about this film.

Music choices for the Cowboys and Indians scene. The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly theme was assume. As well as the Space landing choice.
I loved the mission to get the cookie jar. Got a laugh out of me with that.
Loved the one dude getting his head blown off.
Loved the cookie guards outfits.

What I did not like

over 2 mins of credits for a short is way to much.
To many black, fade transitions between the different ideas. You did have a hard cut for the agents part and that worked well.
I wanted to see this cookie jar and more importantly the cookies that needed armed guards.
What the hell was a muppet doing in this video?

There is a rule in storytelling, if you show a gun in act 1 it has to go off by act 3. I say that because "I WANTED TO SEE THE COOKIE JAR!!!" Dont tell me about a cookie jar that our actors risk their lifes to get to and never have the pay-off shot of it.

Good work and keep shooting!

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Post  ranger7theseries on Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:23 pm

haha great little film. Did you use stock footage fro the planets blowing up?

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Post  SonicOrbStudios on Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:07 am

Ive seen this youtube video in the past, not sure when...did you post at the Windows Movie Maker forums?

I really liked those opening credits with the clouds. Any tips on how you did that?

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